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Posted: **Wed Sep 22, 2010 3:27 am**

Posted: **Wed Sep 22, 2010 4:54 am**

I have not seen all your teases, but the ones I've seen I'd say to watch spelling, punctuation, capitalization.... grammar things mainly. Proofread or have someone else do this for you. I, for one, would not care to submit to an unintelligent Domme who could not spell.

Also, to me anyways, I like some seduction in a tease, not just page after page of instruction. I think it's exciting to feel a tease putting many more thoughts in my head rather than what's just pictured on the page... like the model is actually speaking to me, teasing me, talking, building me up (or down)... in between instructing me. Part of it is the seduction, part is the foreplay, and phucking with the mind in the fantasy is a turn on to me.

But we are all different, so write what you like, what you feel, and express yourself the way you want, not what others would have you write. That's what makes this site fab to me! IMHO.

Posted: **Wed Sep 22, 2010 9:08 pm**

ty for some feedback, i know the spellings bad, it somthing ive always had trouble with,not sure why lol =$ but ill try go over my new 1s a few more times to find the mistakes

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