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FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 9:17 am
by Nezhul
If you have something to say or found any bugs, please, post it here.

That's my first tease, so maybe it isn't balanced that much. Intended as a test of pretty much all nyx features.
The tease is quite long, though I was planning for about 15 mins, it's over 30... I descided not to cut it, and to publish as is.

In the end you may cum or you may not - it's random. You can boost your cum chance by completing some extra tasks.
Also there is "forbidden" button for ones who on denial. You won't have a chance to cum with that.

If you fail, you'll be punished, though you may choose from 4 variants or make it random. That is done because not everyone are good with pain, for example.

Hope you like it.

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 10:44 am
by Lucky
There is an error on the page: "Wow, you did it! Must feel very frustrating... I will take away 4 of 6 no orgasm variants". Tease stops forever :)

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:39 pm
by Nezhul
ermmm I'll check it out now. Strange, I have tested it this morning

Should be working now... If I edit something and save changes - that applyes to the published tease too, right?

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 2:44 pm
by Nezhul
would love to hear reply if something was to easy / hard / boring / etc

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 3:17 pm
by strokerboy3
I really liked the tease and the idea of a forbidden button at the end is a great idea. I'm not allowed to cum and when a tease asks me to its sooo hard not to.

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 3:53 pm
by Nezhul
That's exactly what I'v figured. It would be hard for me to resist, seeing the text like "Cum! Go ahead!" in a tease (when mind is blank with only one thought in it =) )

Currently looking for a nice (blond?) girl with lots of pictures to make a series. Some time ago I have descided on Chikita, but today looked through the pictures - and I don't like the face that much any more... though 2 weeks ago she seemed sooo sexy. :-|
So it'll probably take some time to find a replacement.
If someone knows a good model with lots of sets, feel free to post a name. You know my tastes by Ashlynn, but I don't promice anything ) I'll just check your suggestions, and, who knows, maybe next one will be your favorite ;-)

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 10:06 pm
by passatgt
One beat mens up, second beat down, or one beat a full stroke?

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:15 am
by Nezhul
passatgt wrote:One beat mens up, second beat down, or one beat a full stroke?
full... did I have to point this out? =)
and another model that i found incredibly sexy was a girl named madden, which ive used in a few teases, heres a few links to her:
Very nice girl. sexy. Unfortunately I don't see her showing naked breasts or pussy too much. That's a huge minus, if you ask me.

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:50 pm
by spacerat
One of my all time favourites here. Great work. I like teasing, edging and stroking but I really dislike humiliation, thats not my thing. Hence, your tease war wonderful - and challenging... I did not try the last to rounds to increase the cum chance but I was so lucky to chose the correct button at the end :-D

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:59 pm
by Nezhul
Just remember it's random and next time the same button will be something else.

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:36 pm
by Flogger
Coupla grammatical typos/mistakes (guess English isn't your first languange from the syntax), but apart from that an excellent tease. Deserves its rating of 4.6.

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:51 pm
by Flogger
And blondes? Codi Milo, Charlie Laine (when blonde), Kayden Kross and Carli Banks. No links though.

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:19 pm
by tallguy2241
The "pain" punishment" seems to be written strictly for females, even though the rest of the tease was gender appropriate.

Other than that, a great job!

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:48 pm
by darkfuture
tallguy2241 wrote:The "pain" punishment" seems to be written strictly for females, even though the rest of the tease was gender appropriate.

Other than that, a great job!
I have the same problem.

Cool work, after this

Re: FB: Stroke for Ashlynn

Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 11:03 pm
by thumper7999
tallguy2241 wrote:The "pain" punishment" seems to be written strictly for females, even though the rest of the tease was gender appropriate.

Other than that, a great job!

the forced orgasm button is also written for females (post orgasm torment?). Other than that, love this tease