FB: The Cock Control Club

[hardlife]

I wanted to:
- make this longer
- add more details in the middle to juice up the story

But shuffling pics and text around really kills me, so...
Maybe I'll redo it another day.

[camel]

Yeah, I agree.

My first tease was non-flash, and I ended up using Word to make everything and keep it straight, and then enter it into Milovana.

My second tease was flash, so I ended up using Excel. I typed out what each page should say in one column, and did manipulation so another column had a block of pages that I could copy and paste into Nyx's script editor.

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I loved the idea of your tease, btw. Conjured up a lot of possibilities and story fragments.

- A cockteaser who 'accidentally' teases him to 3 ruined orgasms despite his warnings, leading to (1 + 2 + 4) 7 consecutive weeks in the chastity belt.

- Competitions between cockteasers, most of them unofficial.

- A corrupt cockteaser who doesn't follow the rules, using the organization to find people she can force into becoming blackmailed T&D slaves.

- A cockteaser who finds out her client is trying to learn a foreign language she speaks, and drafts her own special curriculum for him

- A "retreat" house in the woods where each participant is required to spend an entire week there each year, which is like a 5 star resort... for the women.

- "The device we've just attached is an automatic teaser. After working out some bugs, 1-hour tests have been successful, but this is the first overnight test we've ever done..."

- "This is Anna, our first female client. I've decided to compare her increasing stamina against your skill at cunnilingus. Begin. If you lose, Saturday's teasing session will last until late Sunday. However, if Anna loses... " She bent close to Anna, started licking her ear and whispering. I couldn't hear, but as I licked, I could definitely feel Anna's muscles tense and struggle in panic.

[slutty1]

I'd just like to thank you for including the "no-directions" tag. Although some direction-free stories do seem to get very high ratings here, I personally find it very disappointing to start a highly-rated tease only to find that it's an illustrated story with no instructions at all. I hope that others will follow your approach and include a similar tag.

That being said, I did give your tease a quick read-through. I like the concepts and ideas; add some instructions and it could make a nice tease. :)