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I love it. Love it, love it, love it.

Please tell me you plan to do more with this.

Sure I wasn't sure if it would be popular here or not because its a little different from the usual stuff.

Yes, it's a little different, but that's a good thing.

If you can't tell, I love the stories where the evil femme fatale uses her sensuality to defeat the good guys.

It's also nice not having to go to stop the tease on page two and go to Walmart with a shopping list.

storydejour wrote:Yes, it's a little different, but that's a good thing.

If you can't tell, I love the stories where the evil femme fatale uses her sensuality to defeat the good guys.

It's also nice not having to go to stop the tease on page two and go to Walmart with a shopping list.

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Honestly I really liked this one. Liked the story type since having the sexy female villain defeat the superhero is always fun. But also liked how it did take time to win and he doesn't cave instantly. Agree with liking not needing to grab stuff to just enjoy this one.

I posted part 2 and re-posted the original part 1.

Thought part 2 was pretty good. Some nice moments in there and the story is getting depth thanks to throwing in the girl who seduced the side-kick.

Part 3 is up now.

Three great teases, thanks for making them. I have to disagree with baultista about Jordan, she's hot especially in that pink outfit. My only suggestion for improvement would be to break up the text a bit more and have more pictures. Other than that I have no complaints. Looking forward to seeing part 4!

"Tessieta" is actually the model Got Gisele, formerly Hot Gisele. She's pretty popular. Its easy to find her stuff online. If you guy have any other ideas for what you want to see in the next chapter post them here.

Well if you're shopping for ideas one direction I could see this story going is that Tessiata has invented a device that causes men to fall in love and decides to use it on you to ensure your loyalty. It's implanted under the skin so you can't remove it, and although the exact mechanism of how it works isn't known to you, what you do know is that if a normal man with this device has an orgasm he will immediately and permanently become completely smitten with whatever woman he's with. Being a superhero your resolve is greater than the average man, but you're not immune and each orgasm will bring you more under the power of the woman you're with, thus Tess's insistance that only she make you cum. However... it seems her sidekick has some ambitions of her own and slowly you learn of her desire to replace Tess as the Pretty Pink Princess of crime. And all she needs to take over the organization is the help of a superhero dedicated to herself, and she's sure that with Tess's invention in you she'll have you at her beck and call in no time! With careful maneuvering you just might play them off of each other and free your sidekick, if you can resist the device and your own impulses.

I've got the next three teases mapped out if there's interest in them. Right now #4 is up.

Thanks for the feedback. No I might do something else first but I don't know when the next will be up.

Wow, #4 was the best one yet. Great work!

Excellent work on this series, keep it up!