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Just published my first tease. Leave any feedback or suggestions for improvements in here.

Looks promising. Unfortunately I don't have time to do it now, and won't for a while. Still, from what I read, I'm sure it'll be a fun tease. It's well written, the model is hot, and it looks to be full of humiliation (which is for me). Can't wait until I can complete it.

The only think I can say is WOW. Thank you very much for this tease.

OUTSTANDING!!!!

This has to be TOTM!

incredible is just not a strong enough word!

loved your innovation, Congrats on a wonderful tease!

Nice tease, but there is a typo near the end. Page 104 references Pages 104 and 105, should be 105 and 106.

Typo fixed.

One of the best teases on the site, absolutely loved it!

This was amazing. I loved the choices, the interaction, the writing, the content, the model--everything about it. I have to say this is now and all time favorite tease of mine.

I don't know, to me there were some really good elements to the tease, but there were a couple of things I really didn't care for. Personally, I like a little more story to get things started. When I see 'Let’s get started. First, you need to pop that buttplug in your slutty ass.' I pretty much know that the tease isn't going to be among my favorites. It's not that a buttplug is a turnoff, it's just not something I'm gonna do on page 3 of a new tease. Similarly, instructions like "do X 100 times" don't do much for me, regardless of what X happens to be. You showed a lot of creativity overall, so hopefully in your future teases you can put a little more emphasis on the story behind the instructions.

Anyway, that's just my 2 cents. The ratings for your tease are great, so I may very well be in the minority on this...

Loved the tease. You should definitely do more.