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My latest is a completely original story tease:

"Your Investigation Begins": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=8722

Enjoy!

Cactusman, your teases are more like novels! Good ones, mind you. You must put an incredible amount of effort into these... even finding so many relevant pictures must be a nightmare! Well done.

This one was my favourite so far. I read the Erica/Kara series recently and was very impressed, and this one is excellent. What's great about these is how they're based on genuine character-develoment - and this one seems to have a stronger, more deliberate story, which is great.

This one, I think, is sexier without the complex moral concerns of the protagonist from the earlier series. Also here there's a strong feeling of seduction, and it seems a touch more 'believable' in that it's all taking place in this house.

But I have always been a sucker for murder mysteries! I think the female butler did it. I'll be looking forward to the next installment.

Bindo wrote:Cactusman, your teases are more like novels! Good ones, mind you. You must put an incredible amount of effort into these... even finding so many relevant pictures must be a nightmare! Well done.

This one was my favourite so far. I read the Erica/Kara series recently and was very impressed, and this one is excellent. What's great about these is how they're based on genuine character-develoment - and this one seems to have a stronger, more deliberate story, which is great.

This one, I think, is sexier without the complex moral concerns of the protagonist from the earlier series. Also here there's a strong feeling of seduction, and it seems a touch more 'believable' in that it's all taking place in this house.

But I have always been a sucker for murder mysteries! I think the female butler did it. I'll be looking forward to the next installment.

Thanks Bindo. I'm very glad you like it so much.

It is difficult sometimes to find the right pictures. Indeed it was finding the picture on page 2 that led me to choose Shay Lauren to play the role of the widow/goddess in this tease.

You are right that there is a sequel, but it's not finished yet. I think I know who did it, but there is no butler in the house... However, there is a cook!

cactusman wrote:My latest is a completely original story tease:

"Your Investigation": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=8722

Enjoy!

In recognition of the fact that there will be a sequel, I changed the title to "Your Investigation Begins"

I also wanted to point out that the character Shay was partly inspired by the teases by "showme" called "Goddess Training - Lessons ..." For example, the following is the first one:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=6108

It's been an incredible investigation thusfar. As for my prediction: Ms Scarlet, in the library, with a candlestick.

But hey, just because I solved the case doesn't mean I'm not looking forward to more pictures.

And by the way.. what was up with Hanna's knee? And those nipples.. didn't they look a bit out of place over there on the sides of her breasts? Anyway, I mention it because that was a little distracting. Otherwise, you scored a 6 out of 5.

storydejour wrote:It's been an incredible investigation thusfar. As for my prediction: Ms Scarlet, in the library, with a candlestick.

But hey, just because I solved the case doesn't mean I'm not looking forward to more pictures.

And by the way.. what was up with Hanna's knee? And those nipples.. didn't they look a bit out of place over there on the sides of her breasts? Anyway, I mention it because that was a little distracting. Otherwise, you scored a 6 out of 5.

Thanks for your kind words, I appreciate it.
As for Hanna's nipples, I'm pretty sure the lovely Miss Hilton who plays that role has had breast augmentation surgery.
I don't know what you mean about her knees, however. What page did you notice her knee on?

I love this as I do the rest of your work.

DeniedHard wrote:I love this as I do the rest of your work.

Thank you very much.

The second part of "your investigation" is now published as:

"Your Investigation Continues": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=8871

Feedback is appreciated. Enjoy!

Wow!

cactusman you have a real talent!

Thank for another stunning tease!

pbchillin wrote:Wow!

cactusman you have a real talent!

Thank for another stunning tease!

Hey, thank you very much for you kind words. I appreciate it.

You can now access this series using the tag your-investigation-series:

"Your Investigation (so far parts 1-2)": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... ion-series

The second part was also amazing! Really good work, Cactusman. I love reading your teases, even just as fiction sometimes! They're very good.

Bindo wrote:The second part was also amazing! Really good work, Cactusman. I love reading your teases, even just as fiction sometimes! They're very good.

Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate it.

So, who do you think did it, given what you know so far?

Well I'm feeling like it's not a murder, at the moment. I guess that's why I'm not a cop...

The obvious answer is Shay herself! But as I don't trust ex-girlfriends, I am going to say Crystal. (Now that I think about it, Victoria is also totally a suspect.)

I'm looking forward to the Inspector gathering them all in a room, and nakedly going through all his evidence before finally accusing one of them.