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Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?
Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 12:58 pm
by Forevergallant
It was good. I really like the first set of images of Dita, but the second set, Ive never liked those images of her. Her head looks like its floating above her body. A few grammar errors, but otherwise, it was a Solid tease. *gave it a 4
Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?
Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 5:06 pm
by 1azzu1
wow really loved this tease... hope you make a sequal... or just more that can be done in chastity
Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?
Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 10:32 pm
by ohyesplease
I liked the storytelling. very nice tease. lovely photos. just the end was quite abrupt. i hope you will write a sequel
Re: Feedback: Do you really want this key?
Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 11:35 am
by doggy
liked it a lot.
Theend was a bit rushed but good storytelling.