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My latest.
Hope you all like it. Feel free to leave feedback here.

Bill

I loved it!!! Loved the surprise, but then I'm the sort of person who likes a good story to go along with the pictures.

Actually, you almost lost me the first few pages because it looked like just a tease like all the others, with a penis that looked more like a large flacid penis than a hard one that the girl was having to hold up to make it look errect. I'm glad I stuck with it.

Had I written the story, I probably would have spent a little time in the beginning about the hopes and dreams of the couple wanting a baby, how much he loves his wife, feeling a little guilty for talking to this hot woman in the bar, but figures it's harmless enough, etc. Then again, had I written the story, it would probably be getting lower ratings, so remember that when you consider my feedback, lol.

Looking forward to more surprises.

I would've added more to the story, but those were the only pictures I could find of the scene.

Bill

I liked the theme and the pictures. I've always liked your writing, and this was no exception. I was pretty into it until that last surprise. Ouch!