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I just posted a completely original webtease:

"Federal Department of Orgasm Management Census": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=8191

This is something that I wanted to get out while the census was in everyone's mind.

I actually had thought about this idea several weeks ago, and was surprised to see something not completely unlike it as a sketch on Saturday Night Live (see http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tDEYBtJ5f7M) on April 10. Of course, that sketch is just funny, and my webtease is intended to be sexy...

As always, feedback is welcome, and enjoy!

Great story man!

flyingKiltSlave wrote:Great story man!

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

It seems that this is not so well received as my longer teases (currently rated 4.13 with 55 ratings), but oh well...

cactusman wrote:

flyingKiltSlave wrote:Great story man!

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

It seems that this is not so well received as my longer teases (currently rated 4.13 with 55 ratings), but oh well...

Oh no, only a 4.13?!
P.S. how do you get such a detailed rating and see how many people have rated it?

cumhardy wrote:

cactusman wrote: It seems that this is not so well received as my longer teases (currently rated 4.13 with 55 ratings), but oh well...

Oh no, only a 4.13?!
P.S. how do you get such a detailed rating and see how many people have rated it?

Yes, often my teases do better than 4.13, and I had thought this one would. Oh well, often their ratings improve over time...

(And in fact now this tease is at 4.19 with 72 ratings.)

Anyway, I hope you enjoyed it.

While the tease is one of the 10 most recently posted teases, it appears in the RSS feed for milovana, which gives this information. See the link in the upper right of the home page for Milovana, or go directly to: http://feeds.feedburner.com/MilovanaWebteases

I have suggested in the past (http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=4723) that it would be great if authors had access to this information, perhaps in the editor's overview page. But I included this suggestion with a bunch of other stuff, and perhaps the admins didn't notice it. Feel free to make the same suggestion more clearly...

I just made a slight change in the ending, splitting what used to be the last page into two pages and rewriting the last sentence. Enjoy!

cactusman wrote:

cumhardy wrote:

cactusman wrote: It seems that this is not so well received as my longer teases (currently rated 4.13 with 55 ratings), but oh well...

Oh no, only a 4.13?!
P.S. how do you get such a detailed rating and see how many people have rated it?

Yes, often my teases do better than 4.13, and I had thought this one would. Oh well, often their ratings improve over time...

(And in fact now this tease is at 4.19 with 72 ratings.)

Now this tease is rated 4.4 with about 7000 views, which is very pleasing to me. Thanks all!

Again, I'm sorry for all the above about the ratings. See my apology for that elsewhere.

Anyway, this webtease:

"Federal Department of Orgasm Management Census": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=8191

is now back on line again. There were concerns about the copyrights of most of the pictures in the old version, so it has been completely re-illustrated with Java Cova playing the main role. I've changed the story and words slightly to make them match the new pictures.

Enjoy!