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Feedback: Femme Fatale
Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:07 am
by cactusman
I found this interesting and unusual, although not personally arousing.
Thanks.
P.S. In the summary you can change "more deadlier" to "deadlier"
Re: Feedback: Femme Fatale
Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:17 am
by billlr
Actually, I knid of liked it.
It was similar to this tease:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=2768
Bill
Re: Feedback: Femme Fatale
Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 5:56 am
by Syrge
Wow, that was ruthless. I guess I should have payed more attention to the title. I thought it was a little silly at first but as I read I found it to be more suspenseful and engaging. Overall a welcome departure from some of the typical teases.