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FB: Sandy's firend Sandy (sequel to "Like strawberries")
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 4:56 am
by billlr
This is a sequel to "Like strawberries":
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=6768
Enjoy. Feel free to leave comments here.
Bill
Re: FB: Sandy's firend Sandy (sequel to "Like strawberries")
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:09 pm
by cactusman
I liked it, nice work.
My only suggestion is that at one point Sandy says she's pledging a "fraternity," but towards the end it's a more sensible "sorority."
Re: FB: Sandy's friend Sandy (sequel to "Like strawberries")
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 4:55 pm
by billlr
Fixed it. Thanks.
Bill
Re: FB: Sandy's friend Sandy (sequel to "Like strawberries")
Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:02 am
by cactusman
billlr wrote:Fixed it. Thanks.
Great, and you're welcome.