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Two Teases Tonight
Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 5:50 am
by StupidBoy18
Hey All,
Tonight was a very productive day for me on Milovana. I worte two original story teases, I feel that they are my best work I have done on this website. Hopefully you feel the same way. Please feel free to leave me information on what you thought, or leave me a message.
T
Ps. Do not judge me on the first few pictures in the second tease, they are all apart of the story.
Re: Two Teases Tonight
Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:19 pm
by cactusman
StupidBoy18 wrote:Hey All,
Tonight was a very productive day for me on Milovana. I worte two original story teases, I feel that they are my best work I have done on this website. Hopefully you feel the same way. Please feel free to leave me information on what you thought, or leave me a message.
I'm happy to see these and think they are fine work. Keep up the good work!

Re: Two Teases Tonight
Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 7:52 pm
by wonderbo
I just finished "This Isn't a Field Trip Farm". I liked it a lot, very creative. I thought it leaned more towards being an illustrated story than actually being a tease though. I wish you would've continued the story into the milking session.
Re: Two Teases Tonight
Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 8:32 pm
by StupidBoy18
I felt that if I continued it into the milking session it would have lost what I was going for. I didn't want to leave you happy, I wanted to leave the reader wanting more.
Re: Two Teases Tonight
Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 9:49 pm
by wonderbo
StupidBoy18 wrote:I felt that if I continued it into the milking session it would have lost what I was going for. I didn't want to leave you happy, I wanted to leave the reader wanting more.
You achieved it, at least in my case.