Feedback: Fertility Clinic Part 3
Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:35 am
This tease, "Fertility Clinic - Part 3 (Doctor's Orders)" by wonderbo
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7017
is really excellent; I loved it. I like the way this illustrates part of Peter's story (Fertility Clinic), and how you made it all be the woman talking.
I think this is a very good example of using a dominant female soliloquy in a tease and I'm very pleased to see it.
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7017
is really excellent; I loved it. I like the way this illustrates part of Peter's story (Fertility Clinic), and how you made it all be the woman talking.
I think this is a very good example of using a dominant female soliloquy in a tease and I'm very pleased to see it.