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Feedback: Fertility Clinic Part 3

Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 4:35 am
by cactusman
This tease, "Fertility Clinic - Part 3 (Doctor's Orders)" by wonderbo

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7017

is really excellent; I loved it. I like the way this illustrates part of Peter's story (Fertility Clinic), and how you made it all be the woman talking.

I think this is a very good example of using a dominant female soliloquy in a tease and I'm very pleased to see it.

Re: Feedback: Fertility Clinic Part 3

Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 12:53 am
by wonderbo
Thanks cactusman! I had fun making it...and there's more on the way. I've already got all the picture picked out...just need to upload them and do the writing.

I've loved that story by Peter for a while. I wish he was still writing.

Re: Feedback: Fertility Clinic Part 4

Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:05 pm
by cactusman
I also want to compliment you on part 4 of this series. I think it is also very well done. Excellent work!