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I have just posted a quite long original webtease (over 450 pages)

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

This story tease is inspired by several ideas that come from various fantasy letters and board postings, which I have also posted as webteases. Links to those are elsewhere, or you can just search for my webteases with advanced search. that has been in my mind for a while, but is original.

I hope you enjoy it and welcome feedback.

This is definitely the best tease I have read on the entire site. Very well done.

This is definitely the best tease I have read on the entire site. Very well done.

Thanks much. I put a lot of time into it and so I appreciate your comments.

Brilliant tease! I was doing ok until the pic of the blond girl on the plane - she just sent me over the edge. I'll try again though. 450 pages! - it could be long winter...

Everard wrote:Brilliant tease! I was doing ok until the pic of the blond girl on the plane - she just sent me over the edge. I'll try again though. 450 pages! - it could be long winter...

Thanks. That is a picture of Julia Schultz. She has a great face! She also makes a small appearance later in the tease.

I had thought about breaking the tease up into parts, but there was no good way to do that.
But you can bookmark the page you stop at of course, and start from that point...

cactusman wrote:

Everard wrote:Brilliant tease! I was doing ok until the pic of the blond girl on the plane - she just sent me over the edge. I'll try again though. 450 pages! - it could be long winter...

Thanks. That is a picture of Julia Schultz. She has a great face! She also makes a small appearance later in the tease.

I had thought about breaking the tease up into parts, but there was no good way to do that.
But you can bookmark the page you stop at of course, and start from that point...

I forgot to mention, Julia Schultz also stars in a very early tease of mine, another illustrated letter:

The Art of Learning http://www.milovana.com/editor/showtease.php?id=51

cactusman wrote:I have just posted a quite long original webtease (over 450 pages)

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

This story tease is inspired by several ideas that come from various fantasy letters and board postings, which I have also posted as webteases. Links to those are elsewhere, or you can just search for my webteases with advanced search. that has been in my mind for a while, but is original.

I hope you enjoy it and welcome feedback.

I just wanted to thank everyone for the very nice reception this completely original story-tease has gotten.
Any more comments on it?

cactusman wrote:

cactusman wrote:I have just posted a quite long original webtease (over 450 pages)

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

This story tease is inspired by several ideas that come from various fantasy letters and board postings, which I have also posted as webteases. Links to those are elsewhere, or you can just search for my webteases with advanced search. that has been in my mind for a while, but is original.

I hope you enjoy it and welcome feedback.

I just wanted to thank everyone for the very nice reception this completely original story-tease has gotten.
Any more comments on it?

And thanks again for ranking "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" so highly. Today I noticed that it is now ranked number 10 on Milovana. It's quite an honor and I'm very happy about it.

cactusman wrote:

cactusman wrote:

cactusman wrote:I have just posted a quite long original webtease (over 450 pages)

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

This story tease is inspired by several ideas that come from various fantasy letters and board postings, which I have also posted as webteases. Links to those are elsewhere, or you can just search for my webteases with advanced search. that has been in my mind for a while, but is original.

And thanks again for ranking "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" so highly. Today I noticed that it is now ranked number 10 on Milovana. It's quite an honor and I'm very happy about it.

It seems to have settled in at rank 11, after part 3 of the Tonight an Orgasm Will Cost You surpassed it. And it lost the Tease of the Month voting... So I just thought I'd update this.
I just wanted to say that I still appeciate the very positive reception, and the ratings of those who made it through the very long tease. Thanks!

cactusman wrote:

cactusman wrote:

cactusman wrote:I have just posted a quite long original webtease (over 450 pages)

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

This story tease is inspired by several ideas that come from various fantasy letters and board postings, which I have also posted as webteases. Links to those are elsewhere, or you can just search for my webteases

In the last few days I have noticed that "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" seems to have settled into the 9th spot in the rankings of webteases (and it has 6369 views as of today, March 24). To thanks again for your collective positive reception to this.

And allow me to crow that 5 of my webteases are now in the top 9 ranked teases on this site.

I'm sorry for the "crowing" above, see my apology in

http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=5198

If some of you don't like it much, you could rate it again (anonymously) to get its rating back to a more normal level.

Also I had to take this webtease (http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174) down for a while, due to problems with some of the pictures and the DMCA. But it is now back, after replacing the offending pictures. Also the webteases tha it refers to are all back as well. (This is what took a long time.)

Enjoy!