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Comments and suggestions for the tease Prove yourself - The physical

What should the next installment be?
Pass branch - stamina trials etc.
Or
Fail branch - consequences

Should Amy make another appearance or is it time for someone new?


also confessions from a branch of the tease

I loved the first one. I hope the second one is just as super as the first. That said, I have only skimmed the first three pages of the new webtease, and from reading that I do not remember exactly what went on in the first tease. I don't know if it is right to give feedback based on the first three pages, especially if it is negative feedback, but I do not remember the first tease all that well. I do know it had an awesome premise and that I was psyched to see a followup, but the followup seems to have been posted three months later. At this point, I kind of marked this series as one of those great series that had a great into but never got off the ground.

I really hope this tease and the whole series is spectacular, and that it takes teases into a new direction of sorts.

I have written whole teases, but never posted one in a public place, so anyone who has can probably disregard my notes. Sorry. I've never found a tease I was happy with enough to post.

Keep up the work, gah.

I liked how we had to prove ourselves...

Of course I failed everything and am waiting for more of the consequences section.

I would recommend themes like "cock sucking" humiliation and urine play -- but thats me. But something hitting on that we have a 'clit' rather than a 'cock' is best.