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Please give me your views. Good, bad or indifferent.

I liked the idea of Lara Croft wanting something from me. But I didn't really understand the part why cumming means giving in: "if I can make you cum, then that counts as a forfeit on your part and means that you give in" I mean being jerked by Lara doesn't seem like a torture to me. On the other hand, she could edge me several times until I can't stand it any longer and tell her everything she wants to hear.
Just think that would make a little more sense.

P.S.: Some pictures seem to be out of shape...

Now that I think about it, your comments make total sense. So much so that I've actually gone back and edited the tease and included a lot of edging instead. Thanks for the feedback.

I'm always weary of 'celebrity' teases, but this one was excellent - well written, with a great domination scenario and full of good stuff. I also would have liked more edging - seeing as how she'd want you desperate so she can extract the information - but that was excellent regardless.

Great ending too. Loved it. Thanks.

I love celebrity teases!
Although Im not a fan of lara croft or angelina jolie (dont see the attraction myself) so I wasnt that into it. I like the idea of the tease instructions being the girl touching you, and the reader just recreates them I would like to see more teases like that