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FB: Ball Play
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:29 pm
by Serotoniny
Hi @all.
Tell me what you think about that tease.
Re: FB: Ball Play
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:33 am
by smallitalian4
Since I love ball torture, i liked it alot...It was a little short though, i like long teases. overall Good job :)
Re: FB: Ball Play
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:08 am
by dicklet
I'm not so big on ball torture, so can't say I followed her instructions to a T, but she was an amazing model. I would love to see more of her.
Re: FB: Ball Play
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:55 am
by Quazwierdcev283
It was well done, but I do have one complaint. I don't know if this is just a small oversight or if English is not your first language, but I am a stickler for spelling so I just have to point out that "disgusting" is misspelled on pages 5 and 11. Other than that, superb job!
Re: FB: Ball Play
Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:59 pm
by begstobeteased
A new Favorite of mine, but I do wish it was a bit longer. :) Thanks for making it :)
Re: FB: Ball Play
Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:33 pm
by jimbean485
Wonderful tease. I am a big fan of ball torture and I know that not everyone is, so I appreciated it. Great 'happy' ending as well :)
This is just a preference thing, not a critique, but I prefer a little less disdain in my teases (though I know that not everyone does). In any case, I will definitely be keeping an eye out for your stuff. Great work!
Jim