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Feedback - Wake Up to Who?
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:42 pm
by str0be
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=6856
It's been a while since I made a tease so I figured I'd whip one up to kind of get back into the swing of things. So let me know what you think.
str0be
Re: Feedback - Wake Up to Who?
Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 7:12 pm
by BoredOMK17
Your a great tease writer.
I just wish you put more stroke instruction into this tease.
Or at least told us when to start and stop, and when to edge.
But it was well written. Good job!
Re: Feedback - Wake Up to Who?
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 12:11 am
by Incubo
I liked it str0be. Well written.
My only problem with it was just a personal thing really.
If that were my wife, not a chance in hell I'd be cheating on her, but that wouldn't really make an interesting story either.
Anyway, nice job.
Re: Feedback - Wake Up to Who?
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:04 am
by JasonSlut
Great tease I loved it, very well written, and omg who is that woman she is the hottest woman I've ever seen in my life
Re: Feedback - Wake Up to Who?
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 12:53 pm
by Incubo
That's Lindsay Marie.
http://www.freeones.com/html/l_links/Lindsay_Marie/
..and I agree. Smokin' hot. I have quite a crush on her as well.
Re: Feedback - Wake Up to Who?
Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:43 am
by cactusman
I agree with that too, and that you'd have to be an idiot to cheat on a babe like that.
Anyway, nice work!