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So, now that you've visited some of the ladies who might buy you, which one do you really want?
I'm not saying you're necessarily going to get it, there are afterall several more that you haven't met yet, but I'm curious who you like best.

Other comments are welcome as well, but at least take a second to vote.
It's a large tease with a lot of different choices. I'm fairly sure it's all working correctly, but I certainly could have missed something. So if you run into something that isn't right, let me know.
Thanks.

Well written and nice pics. Keep up the good work, our fate is in your hands

Vote for other:

Flash tease that has all as an option, choosing who you want when you start.

angusobrian wrote:Vote for other:

Flash tease that has all as an option, choosing who you want when you start.

First let me say this is fantastic so far! I really felt the part!

At risk of sounding greedy, I like the 'all' option best as angus suggested, so I voted 'other'. It was a tough choice because I like it rough, so Zdenka was not easy to pass up. I for one, would LOVE to visit them all again... even maybe for a one-day trial period with each Domme before the bidding starts.... or a 'community slave' position where all Dommes could rent you for the day! It's a lot of work I know, but possibilities are fabulous and nearly endless! Great work again. Looking forward to much more!

angusobrian wrote:Vote for other:

Flash tease that has all as an option, choosing who you want when you start.

I like the idea, but that would require writing 5 or more teases all in one each time I write a new episode. Not only confusing to write, but it would likely take more pages than you're allowed to have in Nyx. It could be done, but only if I kept each woman's tease short.

If I remember correctly, The House of Tease (sorry, don't remember the author) uses this approach. It has fewer women to choose from, but it's not a series either. A lot harder to imagine doing this for every part of a series. 5, 6, or more different story lines going all over the place. Kind of a "choose your own adventure" type of thing.....Would take a lot of time to keep it all straight.

I really really like that idea though. I may try doing that at some point in the future, but definately not now. I don't have that much spare time on my hands.

For this series.....don't worry. None of these ladies can leave either. You're all stuck here together. They may not be your owner, but that doesn't mean we won't run into them again along the way. The rules of Arcadia haven't all been explained just yet. I dropped little hints throughout the tease about things to come. Lindsay and Kayden have both hinted about playing with someone other than your owner....so it's obviously possible.

dubble wrote:
It was a tough choice because I like it rough, so Zdenka was not easy to pass up.

I figured there'd be at least a few of you out there. All those warnings just got you excited about her huh?

Incubo wrote:

dubble wrote:
It was a tough choice because I like it rough, so Zdenka was not easy to pass up.

I figured there'd be at least a few of you out there. All those warnings just got you excited about her huh?

YUMMY!

if it was possible to vote i would give this tease five stars

Can't seem to vote anymore but I would vote for Jana....

By the way, love the tease and the writing style. Familiar yet new and it seems to work really well. Looking forward to part 3

Hmm....I didn't close the poll.
Should still be able to vote.
Anyone else not able to vote?

If you can't, just post the name and I'll do the numbers manually before I write the next part.
Pretty close voting going on though. That's good. Means there was at least something in it that everyone liked.

it's cause I wasn't full logged in for whatever reason...poll is updated to reflect my choice

Really like it so far. It's actually the reason I made this account. Keep up the good work.
I picked Tori by the way, but Kayden was a close second. Furthermore I wouldn't mind which way the tease goes, but I'd pass on Zdenka though :P

Good luck with the next tease.

SimpleThunder,

Hello,

I like the story.

But I voted for an other women.

I like voluptuous and chubby girls. Big is beautiful.

I like latex and I like the look of latex and the feeling and the taste of it. I like to wear it on my own and I like to see woman in latex. I can’t resist a woman who is wearing latex.

And I would like to see Cunnilingus!!

Thanks and Greetings

Falko

I'm going to consider the voting finished and get to work on the next part.
Very close results between Tori, Lindsay, and Jana.
Will you get what you wanted?
I'm not going to give it away. You'll have to see when the next part is finished.
You might even wish you'd voted differently.

Well....OK, so you didn't have to wait long.
I had the beginning done already, so it didn't take long to finish it.

I must say I was quiet impressed of the well outworked storyline. It was a big "head-cinema", to play this webtease.
You are really a talented writer i.m.o. and I am already addicted to Arcadia.