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THE ART OF PEGGING MEN
Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 12:56 pm
by shybutsub
I didn't class this as a tease? there were no instructions?
Re: THE ART OF PEGGING MEN
Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:27 pm
by BoredOMK17
Yeah, this isn't a tease. Its a great story. Your writing isn't horrible.
But you should probably edit it and have it say "story"
Re: THE ART OF PEGGING MEN
Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:29 pm
by reflog1
i thought is was a good tease
Re: THE ART OF PEGGING MEN
Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 5:43 pm
by billlr
Any idea what are the names of the girls in this tease?
Re: THE ART OF PEGGING MEN
Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 11:24 pm
by Crocko
Not bad for what it was, really.
Diver1 just needs to master the art of NOT TYPING IN CAPS ALL THE TIME!!!1!
Re: THE ART OF PEGGING MEN
Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:56 pm
by SexualChoc
Okay, I really liked the story
I am not 'into' pegging personnally
but the story was well written
and the pictures were great with it.
I give full marks for
1) Doing something rare - very few stories are put in tease format
2) working pictures and content together
3) a tease that can be done while in chastity (there are no instructions!
)
4) Writting a two part story line _ a first I believe
5) What I voted for both 'teases'
It kept me hard and was more entertaining with the photoes than
literotica. Well done.
Re: THE ART OF PEGGING MEN
Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:14 pm
by russell156
i think they are great please do some more. i luv this site.