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Looking for feedback on my Gay Prison Camp series... part 1 was just posted.

just completed your tease, being bi myself i think its fantastic ! More please !! Dont be put off by negative feedback.

Not really my thing, but I had a read through and it was really well written. Good job.

Haha, his speech reminded me of Brad Pitt. "AN' I WAN' MY SCAWLPS"

EightBall wrote:just completed your tease, being bi myself i think its fantastic ! More please !! Dont be put off by negative feedback.

Psst, put off by negative feedback? If I made teases for ratings I would have given up a long time ago...

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

T-rix wrote:Not really my thing, but I had a read through and it was really well written. Good job.

Haha, his speech reminded me of Brad Pitt. "AN' I WAN' MY SCAWLPS"

Don't tell anyone but I might have a bit of a thing for Brad Pitt. Then again, so do most straight people!

Personally, I enjoy femdom forced bi, but not male forced bi. Having the girl at the start helps set the tone, but the second half just doesn't do it for me. Good idea, and I'd like to see more, but for me, whatever imagary is used, it must be accompanied by the voice of a controlling female.

Griffyn wrote:Personally, I enjoy femdom forced bi, but not male forced bi. Having the girl at the start helps set the tone, but the second half just doesn't do it for me. Good idea, and I'd like to see more, but for me, whatever imagary is used, it must be accompanied by the voice of a controlling female.

I'm afraid my teases aren't for you then... I have no interest in making teases that do not feature dominant men as the focus. To be fair, I did tag it as "male-top."

Awesome!

The only issue I might have, and I would never mention it to the guy's face because I don't want to get my ass beat by such a strong man... but, his nut-sack is a little shriveled from all the steroids (oh! oops, did I say that out loud???!!!!) LOL!

J/K-ing. But really, thanks Lord Byron for posting such a great tease! I look forward to the next in the series.

I liked it great job.
Accent was weird though :P hehe

i would like to try a similar tease but with female top.

thank you

esclavomuysumiso wrote:i would like to try a similar tease but with female top.

thank you

As I have already said, I have no interest in making such a tease. You're welcome.

Wow, I just did your tease, and I absolutely cannot wait to see it's continuation. I'm always on the prowl for teases for men with male tops, and this one was written superbly. I'm going to be the wild minority in saying I could care less about having the female included. For me it's all about the Male Domination that gets me going.

I hope you keep going with these because you certainly have an avid reader here :D

I thought it was great. All of your teases are incredible. I'm so glad someone is finally making these types of teases. I hope to see many, many more. Thanks again.

Part 2 is finished. May be a while for Part 3 so enjoy!