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FB: Carla Controls You
Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:28 am
by chewit
Hi guys,
It's been a while since I've had time to write a new tease....too much work lately....but that's finished now so I can have more fun writing teases :)
Let me know what you think of Carla Controls You..
Chewit
Re: FB: Carla Controls You
Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 2:29 pm
by jayjaysub
Fantastic Job!! A great blend of ideas and monumentally beautiful girls. Sandy Fair is great -- well actually it was the attitude you gave her through your writing... lots of honey, baby, etc. I'm not one for abuse so I admit I wasn't dropping any bottles but that's just me.
I get a high out of pleasing women -- teens, low 20's (who are smoking hot of course) who I know are pretty darn unattainable. In reality I have actually gone and cleaned their houses and detailed cars and basically was their complete house servant --- and in return they would just tease me... not blatantly, but teasing by just being around while I was working. Would love to see a tease like that.
Again, Great Job!
Re: FB: Carla Controls You
Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 1:17 am
by notredmirsh7
your tease was way too long
Re: FB: Carla Controls You
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:51 am
by fraction
This is a superb tease! Good variety of elements , tease , torture , tease , ... and a serious ending. I like your teases very much Chewit! Always quality and good moods for those who really try!