FB: Dear Hubby
Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:45 pm
Ok, this was a very spur of the moment inspiration when looking through pictures, but I like this a LOT better than my first tease. Was going to do more with the Meeting Nikki series, but that Addison Rose photo set just had to be used!
I kind of went outside my comfort zone in the writing on this btw, so please let me know if any of the dialog seems off. On my proofread it felt ok though...maybe I'm just paranoid. Would love all honest opinions and constructive criticism, only way I'll improve if something is in fact off.
Also, not sure on ettiqute for asking for feedback. Did a seperate thread from my Meeting Nikki FB since I'd like to keep the feedback seperate. But I also don't want to spam the forums, so mods feel free to merge threads if needed, it won't bother me much.
Thanks for reading and for any feedback! Hope you enjoyed the tease ;)
I kind of went outside my comfort zone in the writing on this btw, so please let me know if any of the dialog seems off. On my proofread it felt ok though...maybe I'm just paranoid. Would love all honest opinions and constructive criticism, only way I'll improve if something is in fact off.
Also, not sure on ettiqute for asking for feedback. Did a seperate thread from my Meeting Nikki FB since I'd like to keep the feedback seperate. But I also don't want to spam the forums, so mods feel free to merge threads if needed, it won't bother me much.
Thanks for reading and for any feedback! Hope you enjoyed the tease ;)