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Hey everybody, The Tournament was my first tease and I feel I can do a lot better on the sequel, but I'm not sure how to go about it. I have a basic idea of what I want to do but I feel the little things are really important, so any suggestions or critiques are more than welcome. Please be as honest as possible, don't sugarcoat it.

Looks like a good start!

Unfortunately, they've removed the first video you link to - any chance you could fix that?

I just fixed it, thanks

OMG!! Kate is SO hot! And you found pics of her... well, wearing... the same cute little purple nightie I've been eyeing to buy so I can wear it for my boyfriend!

But now I'm embarassed, I'm not as pretty as Kate, but I still want a cute little purple nightie to wear for my b/f, now I have to find a different one.

Otherwise a great tease, but I've got to give it a thumbs-down, because you randomly got pics of the most gorgeous woman while she was wearing my clothes!

I thought the first was a damn fantastic tease. Beautifully written, with depth and characterization, not to mention lots of stunning women.

Great tease!!!

Looking forward to the follow ups!

I went through this tease and found it to be a great blend of challenge and pleasure. I think it is one of the best beginnings to a series that i have come across. I enjoy teases with dildos and this has a great work up to this then finally ends in denial!!!! PERFECT! Well just wanted you to hear good feed back and give credit where due ya know.

Just letting you know, the first video link is broken again as Yahoo has removed the video