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Re: FB: Beach training session
Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:40 pm
by state of denial
I think this is an awsome tease. However, after about 1500 strokes I began to wonder if there was an end or I was stuck in some vicious, ground hog day type loop.
It's been one more slide for about 20-25 slides now.
Re: FB: Beach training session
Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:44 pm
by JelloBoy
abraves4410,
I tried the tease today, I loved it! I really like the pages where they say "Better make it!" and "Don't finish early!" They where the right things to say at the right time, I could almost hear the girl(s) giggling as they spoke the words!
Can't wait for the next in the series, there is going to be a series, right?
Re: FB: Beach training session
Posted: Sat Aug 08, 2009 10:32 am
by state of denial
Great tease!!!!
I love the simplicity. I enjoyed the coaxing at the bottom; the fact that there was no nudity (that I can remember), which I really didn't notice until the end. The timers and the implied timers were well thought out.
SPECTACULAR ENDING!!!!