Milovana.com

Hi everyone,

This is my second ever attempt at a webtease - hope you like it!

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=5703

If anyone has any constructive (or even unconstructive - I can take it!) feedback, I'd be very grateful...

Oh, and it would be nice to get more than the two responses from 400 or so viewings that I got last time, people...

Cheers,

Lewis

Love the pics.
I've not done the tease through yet, but Eva is gorgeous.
I like the non-nude sets on here. All helps with the tease element.

Well done Lewis

Thanks a million for the feedback coconuts,

I agree about the non-nude aspect: while I'm not specifically turned-on by CFNM, it seems pretty likely to me that a controlling mistress would only be disrobing pretty rarely, and for her benefit rather than ours!

Cheers,

Lewis

I am loving it ;) Hope you will do one in 40 days again *g*

loved the webtease even if i'm not allowed to stroke at the moment

Avalarion wrote:I am loving it ;) Hope you will do one in 40 days again *g*

You know what, Avalarion? I may just do that! Thanks for the feedback, mate. So, 40 days' time would be... September 14th - look out for it!

submale01 wrote:loved the webtease even if i'm not allowed to stroke at the moment

Thanks submale01 - much appreciated. Hope you're allowed to stroke soon...

Your first tease was great. Sorry feedback is late.

camipco wrote:Your first tease was great. Sorry feedback is late.

Cheers camipco! Does that mean that you preferred 'Little Devil'? If so, would you mind telling me why you preferred it? Thanks a million!

Great tease.

Unfortunately, I lost my load on picture 7.
It was just too hot.

Just so's you all know. LOL

Bill

lewis_cameron wrote:

camipco wrote:Your first tease was great. Sorry feedback is late.

Cheers camipco! Does that mean that you preferred 'Little Devil'? If so, would you mind telling me why you preferred it? Thanks a million!

Ok, read the new one. I loved it. I especially liked the way you used the perfect photo at the end. Great writing too, you really capture her tone.

I liked it too. Very well written, and the text matched the photos, which always helps to make it seem more real.

Well done buddy!

camipco wrote:

lewis_cameron wrote:

camipco wrote:Your first tease was great. Sorry feedback is late.

Cheers camipco! Does that mean that you preferred 'Little Devil'? If so, would you mind telling me why you preferred it? Thanks a million!

Ok, read the new one. I loved it. I especially liked the way you used the perfect photo at the end. Great writing too, you really capture her tone.

Thanks a lot, camipco! I have to admit, I spent quite a long time looking for a photoset that included one like that! And as for the tone, I based that almost entirely on my favourite mistress at www.cockcontrol.com! Don't worry, this is not some devious marketing ploy, it's the truth!

Dan wrote:I liked it too. Very well written, and the text matched the photos, which always helps to make it seem more real.

Well done buddy!

Cheers Dan! That means a lot coming from someone who is lucky enough to be experiencing T&D at the hands of an expert in real life! In the words of Monty Python: 'you lucky, lucky bastard'!

billlr wrote:Great tease.

Unfortunately, I lost my load on picture 7.
It was just too hot.

Just so's you all know. LOL

Bill

Haha! Obviously an 'ass man', then Bill?

Thanks for the info BTW - I guess I must have made it a bit too challenging for some, then!

Cheers,

Lewis