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Re: A Spy, caught: Feedback

Posted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:12 pm
by BrianWantsToCum
Most of the pictures won't load for me

Re: A Spy, caught: Feedback

Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:43 am
by curved
Had this before - just remembered why. Disabled Adblock Plus for milovana and all is ok...

Re: A Spy, caught: Feedback

Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 6:33 am
by Quazwierdcev283
it was kind of fun to read. Not really my thing, but i can tell you put a lot of effort into this. Kudos on seamless storytelling and good grammar :-D . Even though I thought it was well done I do have a question about it. I'm just wondering why it's tagged "for-guys?" It has a lot of naked girls, yes, but the things that are being done are mainly done to women there is not talk of guys in it, torturing or otherwise :unsure: . Shouldn't it be titled, more appropriately, "for-gals/women (or however those are titled)?"
Just wondering, please correct me if I am wrong and/or point out why you tagged it "for guys."
:offtopic: I just noticed that we have tons of emoticons, more than anyone should need. Cool, eh?

Re: A Spy, caught: Feedback

Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 7:33 am
by billlr
I thought it was pretty good.

There should be MORE teases with virgin girls losing their hymens aspart of the plot.

Bill

Re: A Spy, caught: Feedback

Posted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 2:17 pm
by ordered
Very hot! Loved it... Pics worked fine. I'm East Coast, I've found that around 11:00-midnight my RoadRunner broadband slows down, and especially the Milovana site. I realized that's around 8:00 in California, when everyone across the country is online...

But the tease is awesome! The virgin/ hymen part kind of lost me, and like QuazWierd said it seems to be written for gals (not to say us bottom guys can't enjoy it!) But yeah, great storyline, very creative, and well-written. Thanks, Indigo!