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britney's new tease

Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 5:54 pm
by notredmirsh7
So what do you guys think about this tease? Was it good? Was it awfull? Do you think I should make a 4th tease in the britney series? All feed back is welcome even if not postive

Re: britney's new tease

Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 9:16 am
by camipco
I enjoyed it to read, although there's no way I'm able to follow instructions like that personally. The series is good so far and I'd definitely like more.

Just a small note. When you mean "you are" the word is "you're" not "your". So it should be "you're awake again" (but "your balls" is correct). I noticed this often in the Britney teases, and it's always a little distracting.

Re: britney's new tease

Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:33 am
by ThomasKu
The tease looked really hard to do.
Just a question, but do you try to do your own teases, before you post em? :w00t:

Re: britney's new tease

Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 8:53 pm
by notredmirsh7
usally not. but i figure it was a tease for people who would like to take a challenge. I feel a lot of tease and denial should be diffucult for people to do. Do you guys think i should make the next one a little softer than?

Re: britney's new tease

Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:24 pm
by ThomasKu
In the end its really up to you. Some will love it, others won't. You can't make everybody happy. So make a tease just how you would love to be teased ;)

Re: britney's new tease

Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 1:03 am
by notredmirsh7
ok. I do try to make the tease that everybody would like to do. All feedback is welcome to me. Weather it's good or bad thats how you progress at writing teases

Re: britney's new tease

Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:34 am
by all2true
Sorry for the late post,
(on Britney's edge game)
I liked the tease but don't think it's possible.
I had a question though
The instructions for page 8, the ice play page were a bit confusing for me
I thought I was suppose to do an edge every page (as stated previously)
so am I Not supposed to do an edge on page 8? or do ice and then an edge?
Also doing 20 edges in five minutes? with 10 sec breaks AND not cumming?
I think I'll go back in the cage for having less than 20 sorry, never made it past page ten.

Ps. I rarely complain about spelling but even I was distracted by some really glaring typos.

However I did like the tease. Iwant to try the tease again, hope I make it this time.
must admit I had to stop, didn't finish the tease