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Just tried to produce a quick, fun tease to try out the editor. The pics don't seem to work, is it just a simple matter of using a different set?

It's kind of a boring overused concept, but just a quickie write up of something I like. I'll see about converting to the other format with the question mark timers, it would certainly be more fun for you guys if you don't get to time it yourselves, or even know how long it's going to last.

This being my 1st tease, I'd sure appreciate any feedback, good, bad, or ugly...
Thanks

oh yeah i think when you use pictures from these sites you have to be a member of that site to view them.
a lot of people get their pictures from free galleries on different sites.
The tease was well written. It was right down to the point though, really no story.
Also I noticed it seemed short, and we were told to pump it for 15 minutes...

I don't know if pumping my ass for 15 minutes would be fun or entertaining
but i do know that when i come across a tease that says "now stroke for 15 minutes"
I am not going to be listening to that order because... thats boring and a long time to stroke. lol.

you might try something more like "pump it in and out 35 times" ...I don't know?
But it was good! Keep it coming!

Thanks for the response, and yeah, that's exactly what I had expected to hear about the tease. I'm going to try again- this next one may take a couple days to put together, or it may take a couple of weeks... It'll be worth the wait...