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This is my first attempt at a tease. I just had a bunch of ideas floating through my head for the longest time and I finally sat down and put them into play this week.

It's long, and pretty difficult (I think). I couldn't make it through without cheating.

Let me know what you all think. I hope you enjoy it.

Great tease BWTC! I loved the story and the drama. Also, the mind game of them not wanting you to cum, then trying to make you come, then encouraging you to resist again was incredible. I haven't actually done the tease yet, just read through it. Hopefully I'll have time to do this later this evening or this weekend. I already rated it a 5 and marked it as one of my favorites though.

wonderbo wrote: I haven't actually done the tease yet, just read through it.

Now I couldn't do this; its like reading the last page of a "whodunnit" and then reading the book.
For me, half the pleasure of a web-tease is the anitcipation of not knowing what is coming next!!

anybody else ?

Brian, i think Psycho Mistress is the best webtease ever on Milovana!! I have saved this one to my favorites and plan to offer it to my Mistress for bottom up guidance at what drives me over the edge. The climax with this tease for me was one of the most intense ever. The story line was well done and believable, the use of the real porn stars and their videos was incredible, and the time to work through the tease was worth every second. I tried to give you to five (5) votes but Milovana would not let me vote twice...

This one is my vote for tease of the month!!

Definitely a great tease Brian. I hope we see more of your work.
The mind game of trying not to cum while they are trying to make you cum,
Yeah, I'm happy someone else had the same Idea as me. Definitely hot.
When I finally get around to publishing my teases, you'll see some of that.
Hopefully you can integrate some more creative ideas, and different fetishes.
By the way, this is definitely TOTM quality.

Chico- While I agree with what you said, sometimes its hard to stay away.
Some days your trying to hold back, but you really cant resist teasing yourself.
So you look at a new Milovana tease. I try not to read the last few pages.

Chico wrote:

wonderbo wrote: I haven't actually done the tease yet, just read through it.

Now I couldn't do this; its like reading the last page of a "whodunnit" and then reading the book.
For me, half the pleasure of a web-tease is the anitcipation of not knowing what is coming next!!

anybody else ?

I agree, I'm just not that good at avoiding it. Being married to a wife who is not aware of my fetish, I'm not always sure when I'll have a chance to indulge in a tease that doesn't require me to go in a stall at work, etc. I often "preview" teases to see if they will be worth my time when my wife is at the store or out with friends for several hours.

Actually, the life I have is a pretty good tease in of itself now that I think about it. I'm married to a very beautiful woman who when she caught me looking at porn once made it clear that the next time would be the end of our relationship. However, while expressing a desire to satisfy me sexually, only bothers to follow through on this every few weeks. This leaves me on my own the rest of the time. I've enjoyed the frustration of teasing myself between sex, not knowing what night she will choose to give me release. Of course, she appear completely aloof to all of this and as far as I know knows nothing of my behavior.

Thanks so much everyone for your compliments.

I'm really glad I finally got around to putting this together. As I said, the premise was swimming around in my head for the last few weeks. It's undergone some significant revisions since then, but I'm really happy with the final product.

I'm so glad you've all enjoyed it, and I really appreciate the feedback. That really motivates me to want to do more.

I thought this was a great tease. Truly fantastic


Just thought I should mention that for me the video link on pg 23 did not work. You might want to double check it.

danchi42 wrote:Just thought I should mention that for me the video link on pg 23 did not work. You might want to double check it.

There's just an extra H at the start of the link. Remove that and it'll work.

Fixed!

Thanks for helping!