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First tease - Please Enter

Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 2:44 am
by oogal
Hi Everyone,

I've just posted my first tease - "Please enter".

It was a lot of fun, and the editor very easy to use. Though more time consuming and challenging than I thought.

Any feedback on the tease would be much appreciated.

Thanks,
oogal

Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2006 3:27 pm
by Salerio
One of the best I've seen recently. Good job.

Posted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 9:51 am
by surfcreanative
This is definitely one the best teases around.

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the first image of the amazily beautiful and alluring clothing she was wearing, you have no idea how much I wanted to see her 'temple' ;-) ... the twist at the end just made it all the much more harder.

Not sure if I'm happy I didn't look or not

Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:49 pm
by r0nin
Excellent!

Re: First tease - Please Enter

Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2011 7:10 pm
by nobrainer134
REALLY GOOD TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
SHES SO HOT!!!!