FB: No cummies
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 2:39 am
I personally think there should have been more of a buildup before he came.
Other than that, not a bad premise.
Bill
Other than that, not a bad premise.
Bill
Agreed, not much of a build up and the typos are distracting.billlr wrote:I personally think there should have been more of a buildup before he came.
Other than that, not a bad premise.
Bill