Help with a story.
Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2009 4:12 pm
Hello Milovanians!
I know I haven't been on here for a month or so, but I'm back now with a request. I know, I can be so demanding
, but you guys are a great community, so I know you'll help me out if you can. Thanks in advance. Now to my request:
My Goddess (little_lily
) has me writing a story for her. It started out as a little thing to amuse her, but it's become a five-part epic, recounting an imaginary weekend spent as her slave. But right now I'm stuck on part three. I don't want to give away any plot points (in case she reads this), and I'm not looking for help with ideas. The weekend has taken on a life of its own, and it's all I can do to find a way to make everything fit.
But what I've realized is, I'm not any good at oral sex.
No, no, no, I don't have any problem doing it (not that I've had opportunity lately 
), but I don't really like my attempts to write it. Could anyone point me in the direction of some good erotica with vivid descriptions of oral sex? The female bits are what I need (I don't think I'd have any trouble describing someone going down on me, but that's not really what this story is about).
Thanks again for any help.
~Jace
I know I haven't been on here for a month or so, but I'm back now with a request. I know, I can be so demanding
, but you guys are a great community, so I know you'll help me out if you can. Thanks in advance. Now to my request:My Goddess (little_lily
) has me writing a story for her. It started out as a little thing to amuse her, but it's become a five-part epic, recounting an imaginary weekend spent as her slave. But right now I'm stuck on part three. I don't want to give away any plot points (in case she reads this), and I'm not looking for help with ideas. The weekend has taken on a life of its own, and it's all I can do to find a way to make everything fit.But what I've realized is, I'm not any good at oral sex.
No, no, no, I don't have any problem doing it (not that I've had opportunity lately ), but I don't really like my attempts to write it. Could anyone point me in the direction of some good erotica with vivid descriptions of oral sex? The female bits are what I need (I don't think I'd have any trouble describing someone going down on me, but that's not really what this story is about).Thanks again for any help.
~Jace
, a personal invitation from Nika Ferlinghetti. I had honestly expected just some links to a few of the community's favorite eroticas. In any case, Miss Nika, I've PM'd you. Thank you again for your interest. To anyone else, feel free to post a link or two. I'll definitely take inspiration from multiple sources if I can get it.