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Okay tuggers, listen up. I made a tease. Okay I wrote it, and pissy put it together, but still its mine. And I want to hear what you strokers think of it. My name is right in the title, so you can't miss it.

Nika

It's not very good at all, unfortunately... though due entirely to poor execution, and not problems with your provided text. Infact, the problems have to do with terrible delivery of the text, misplaced timers making the text a race to read, etc.

I think Pissy needs six of the best and some corner time.

Well, I have offered to change things, if Miss Nika wants me to. Also, this was my first ever tease, so give me a break.

I think it's up to Nika if you get a break, not me.

She was happy with it, but you guys might have changed her mind. I'm not sure if I should be thankful for that or not...

I couldn't have imagined anyone having difficulty reading the text in time, although the font was rather small on each page. I've seen that problem on some other teases recently, though, and I'm not technically minded enough to complain or offer advice.

Congrats to both of you for a delightfully written tease and finding an excuisite model.

It was good, I thank you both for the effort. But there's room for improvement within that tease.