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It looks ok so far, but that text size REALLY needs to increase. Most people run at at least 1024x764, most likely more.

Also, don't put timers on reading parts. That just forces the person to read quickly.

(To the peanut gallery: Yes I know you might be able to use that to tease somehow.)

I agree...the text is WAY too small. I couldnt keep on with the tease because i got tired of squinting to read the words. I even tried full screen and the text wasnt big enough. The timers on the reading is a minor detail, if the text size was bigger it would be much better in my opinion...

The reason I had the text so small was because on a few pages there was a lot of it and I wanted to make sure it all fit on. Sorry if it was too much guys. As for the timers, Nika asked for them, and who am I to refuse her.

pissy-boy wrote:The reason I had the text so small was because on a few pages there was a lot of it and I wanted to make sure it all fit on. Sorry if it was too much guys. As for the timers, Nika asked for them, and who am I to refuse her.

It might help to enlarge the text to make it easier to read, split it across multiple pages so it will fit if need be, and add a continue button that will activate the timer when the user is ready / finished reading. Example of #page1 with a lot of text and a timer gets turned into #page1 (text) #page1a (text cont'd) #page1b (timer is now activated). I run at 1280 x 1024 and it's difficult to read, but what I did read I liked.

For the content of the tease, I enjoyed it. I like the story-telling style of teases like this when they come out. A breath of fresh air a lot of the time, to say the least.

Thanks for the feedback Evals. I was working with a limited set of images as well, so I didn't want to use too many pages and have them get repetitive. I'll definately keep it in mind. If Miss Nika wants me to, I will of course go back and sort the tease out.

I've read the tease and I enjoy it.

I love the idea to set the story in a wife-hausband relationship so i ask you a favour.
Can you/You put in a form that can be used by a couple (i know that i am not the only one trying to import T&D in wedding life) ?
Something like:
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=63

pissy-boy wrote:The reason I had the text so small was because on a few pages there was a lot of it and I wanted to make sure it all fit on.

I used to do that because I didnt realise the little X button in the corner of the tease makes it fullscreen. It clips longer text unless you view it in fullscreen.

I appreciated a sensual tease
I thank Niki for giving us such a wonderful tease
Sure the text was small
We should be saying thanks that there was any text at ALL!
Teases from Niki are rare treat!
I see that this tease as working fairly well for a couple.
I will be sharing it later with my mistress
I didn't see any need for change, it already has suggestions of what the woman can do in the tease.
Thank you!

I very much enjoyed the tease. The added danger of sitting at my desk as i did so (made possible by the lack of full nudidty) was intense. I could see this as a tease to introduce my wife to the whole thing, if i thought she'd be open to it. Very nice to see a woman's sensual touch ont the tease (and yes, i'd rather see that touch somewhere else, but I'll take what I can get)