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Date For Hire - 1
Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 10:48 am
by Makarov
Bugs? Opinions? This is the place to talk about it.
Re: Date For Hire - 1
Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:57 pm
by t&d&cbt4me
Liked it, great models, and an interesting story. My only suggestion would be to make it real clear that the tease was over, by maybe putting something at the bottom of the last page that says "Bye now".
Re: Date For Hire - 1
Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 9:34 pm
by Makarov
Thanks for the suggestion! The tease has been updated to display the words *The End* on each ending panel.
Re: Date For Hire - 1
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 7:16 am
by Makarov
The tease has been updated to let girls play, too. As always, bugs and opinions, this is the spot.
Re: Date For Hire - 1
Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:42 pm
by AtTheEdge
Excellent job.