So Close, and Yet No Clue!
Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 5:45 am
Nice one Angel,
I really like the story for this one. If I followed it right you are the secretary getting your boss to masturbate in front of you. Somewhere in the middle you take the call from his wife while he is stroking it, you tease him about it and hand the phone to him.
That is an awesome idea to build a webtease around. Having a guy stroke it for you while he is trying to talk to his wife is very kinky.
I like the sexy and high quality look to the photo. You can tell someone with an artistic eye took the shot.
I’m still trying to figure out what this community likes and doesnt like, but I think if you find a series of photos you would get a better response. Giving visuals and story in smaller sections as you build tension is what this medium is really good at. I think if you were to add that element to this tease you would really blow some minds.
But again, top notch story. I think if you utilized the editor more fully you’d build a huge fan club.
I really like the story for this one. If I followed it right you are the secretary getting your boss to masturbate in front of you. Somewhere in the middle you take the call from his wife while he is stroking it, you tease him about it and hand the phone to him.
That is an awesome idea to build a webtease around. Having a guy stroke it for you while he is trying to talk to his wife is very kinky.
I like the sexy and high quality look to the photo. You can tell someone with an artistic eye took the shot.
I’m still trying to figure out what this community likes and doesnt like, but I think if you find a series of photos you would get a better response. Giving visuals and story in smaller sections as you build tension is what this medium is really good at. I think if you were to add that element to this tease you would really blow some minds.
But again, top notch story. I think if you utilized the editor more fully you’d build a huge fan club.
