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Feedback: Late to Work
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:32 am
by dicklet
Amazing pictures, though I thought the story could have been a little better (though having never written a tease of my own, I'm hardly in a position to criticise). Look forward to more along thee lines though.
That model is amazing, and I *love* bitchy office girls.
Re: Feedback: Late to Work
Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:40 am
by Cider
Honestly, i dont know if i have ever screwed up and came so quickly on any tease.
What the hell?! i cant hold an edge for a minute?
Anyways, i thought the tease was great, if i could have actually made it all the way through i would probably have to say that it was a little short, but what the hell i couldn't even make it through it as it is.......much less if it was longer.
I say good job!
