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Asian Fire, Feedback?
Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 11:28 am
by seraph0x
Rate this tease: 1 2 3 4 5
Please only rate teases you have actually seen!
Hey guys,
If you tried out
Asian Fire please let me you what you thought!
I wanna improve my Webtease writing skills.
seraph!
Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 1:38 pm
by willingtoy
Nice work. I love the story, provided some form of interaction for the user of the webtease. Being an asian myself, this has quite the bit of meaning for me.
Looking forward to more good work of yours. =)
But, hmm .. the main page listing of webtease does not show the thumbnail of the first image? I think that should be fixed.
Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 1:52 pm
by stormeagle
Oooh, thumbnails - that'd be good.
Posted: Sun Aug 13, 2006 2:49 pm
by seraph0x
Nice work. I love the story, provided some form of interaction for the user of the webtease. Being an asian myself, this has quite the bit of meaning for me.
Glad you like it, thanks!
But, hmm .. the main page listing of webtease does not show the thumbnail of the first image? I think that should be fixed.
You're absolutely right, it's fixed now.
Oooh, thumbnails - that'd be good.
Hehe, if thumbnails impress you, try posting a tease, that's where I put in most of the effort.
Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:45 pm
by doink
Asians turn my crank! SHE is FABULOUS! I like to see some pink, though. As for the text: a nifty new angle, in my opinion. Some spots, the text was a bit long and distracting. Overall, high marks for that one!
----Doink.
Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 12:11 am
by seraph0x
Hehe, then you will like my next one, too. I'm going put a bit more effort into it though, so it'll take a while to finish it.
Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:50 pm
by whacker44
asian fire was really hot...i had a multiple !!!