First new tease in awhile
Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 11:00 pm
Check out trouble, first new tease in awhile and let me know what you think.
I quite liked your tease, by the look of the vote rating you are getting, i would say that everyone else liked it aswell.
I loved the cock and ball torture, in my honest opinion, cbt is as important as the teasing. You had quite a bit in there which i expected from the title.
However, i am a firm believer in creating a story to tie in with the tease text. Your tease text was great, but there was little or no story to heighten the experience. So if/when you do your next tease, if you incorporated a story into it, i would love it all that much more.
I gave it a 3 out of 5. It was a great tease but you have areas for improvemant. Great Work!!!!
