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Hello That my second tease and it's about finantial domination hope you like it
For the future i think i will add voice and other run
Don't exitate to leave feedback
http://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=76103

I like the idea. Engaging in a taboo fetish in a safe RP manner is always nice.
A voice could be a nice addition indeed.

To add some suggestions:

• I think a few more pictures, ideally with some nudity involved, would be nice. In the theme of the tease, I could see an aspect of buying nudes from the domme.
• One could consider the idea of making the work aspect of the tease more involved. If you can give the player the feeling that they worked for the money, the payments will feel more like actual payments. Perhaps some physical exercise or writing lines could need to be completed to earn money.
• I think the idea to add another run, as you already mentioned, would work really well. It adds to the aspect that after the money drain you have to earn it again.

Thanks for the reply, I will take it into account.

Idea is good, but it needs a lot of work, this feels more as a proof of concept rather than a tease, here are some issues I found:
- The name is bugged, I don't know if is just me, but when she asks my name I don't get the type box and my name, by default is 0, and same happens with address, when she asks for address it just says 0

- The work part is too empty, again, I know that this is a proof of concept, but in this kind of games where you implement a monetary system money needs to have value, so far getting money is not challenging, it does not have any downside and it has no other purpose, is just a number on the screen that goes down but there are no real consequences

- Far too short, in the conversation with the girl you set up for a long term interaction with things such as "you can no longer cum without permission" or "If you disobey I will expose you"

- Too little choice and sometimes things are repeating, like

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she asked me to get hard, I told her I was hard and then she complained that I was taking too long to get hard and I had to tell her 2 times i was hard

As I said the idea is not bad, but releasing it this early in development feels very rushed

I understand what you mean i wiil try improving the game