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[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2025 6:26 am
by firsttenth1353
Hey Thanks for the feedback on part one, I'm sorry EOS is a bit much for me I prefer the simple teases. Maybe someday I'll take the time to learn EOS but probably not for this story. TBD on the next one. Open to feedback well wishes or bad wishes here. If you know my work you probably know where we're going (sorta) but hope you all enjoy this one.
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=74642
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2025 3:04 pm
by Pinkygen
Fan of this series and your work. Look forward to see what its in store for Tim.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Wed Feb 26, 2025 11:10 pm
by manwithcape
If you don't plan to use the EOS features to do something interesting with them, don't even bother.
I love your teases as they are and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Thu Feb 27, 2025 1:50 am
by qwerrewq21
Another great tease, you just don't miss. Looking forward to part 3!
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2025 7:18 pm
by curiosity4me
Very good tease! PLEASE make a part 3 and more!!!!
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2025 10:06 pm
by jckii
Loved It, please do more! if you don't mind me asking are your older captions available anywhere?
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2025 6:47 am
by MiraVit
I really enjoyed it! Please do more, you have a talent.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] Beta Testers Part Two
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2025 5:11 pm
by feindishly
AMAZING tease again! Seriously, 5 stars! Suuuper hot. love it. And I think I prefer the simple click through format for the teases. Waiting for text to slowly scroll/animate in a lot of other teases just makes them harder to read. Sometimes simple is better.
some very very minor proof reading stuff:
page 29: "You only need you to worship Tim."
page 35 - should be two : "I'll let you too get acquainted"
page 37: Now closed your eyes Tim.
page 39: should be you're - "Your too weak. "