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[RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Fri Feb 14, 2025 10:03 pm
by firsttenth1353
New Tease, shorter this time probably part of a series. Feedback welcome
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=74195
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Sat Feb 15, 2025 8:24 am
by W0nderland
This was incredible and I'm so excited for more!
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Sat Feb 15, 2025 9:53 am
by ccgssdtttew
Really enjoyed it. I like the last part the most (of course the lead up story too). The description of helplessness and submitting control was great. and the AGAIN. Yes, forced orgasm is great
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Sat Feb 15, 2025 8:29 pm
by Agile_poet
Very good! I lost the story on p28. Was there a part missing or out if order?
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2025 9:23 am
by Awesome!
Absolutely incredible.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2025 5:17 pm
by qatguy
you need a EOS version of Beta Testers, so we dont have to keep clicking on the page/link.
just a thought.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Tue Feb 18, 2025 7:53 pm
by UrSlaveInGB
I don't usually login to rate/comment on teases, but I had to for this one.
THIS WAS FANTASTIC AND VERY WELL WRITTEN!
It kept me captivated and eager to see what happened next, cannot wait for the next installment.
Would be interesting to continue in an EOS version with perhaps some hypno videos.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Wed Feb 19, 2025 5:21 pm
by Pinkygen
Big fan of this and your other teases.
Is there a place where you post your work/other images?
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2025 12:11 am
by timpu713
This was one of my favorite story teases I've read in a while! I also really loved your summer series. Thank you so much for sharing your excellent writing with us! You have spoiled us with your generous gifts of your time, energy, and skills.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2025 4:51 pm
by bennygrimm
I always love your stuff, but this was really excellent. Well done!
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2025 11:15 pm
by feindishly
suuuper hot tease. Loved it. I really miss your old captions from bdsmlr, it was some of the best content on that site(back before the site became borderline unusable, lol). It would be great to see some of those old captions revived in tease form! super hot! 10 out of 10!
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK] BETA TESTERS
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2025 2:12 am
by feindishly
hey, again, truly amazing tease! Here are some minor typos I noticed on the second read through.
page 10 should be - knight's armor
page 12 unexpected ending to this line, I'm guessing it should say "a collar" : "Suddenly I felt something tightening around my neck my hand rushed to my neck and i felt something leather. a"
page 12 no punctuation here, but still readable: I sprinted I ran I ran as fast as I could...
page 13. I think should say, "Tim, Tim you're" -- "Tim Time you're safe here, come come sit."
page 24: "See isn't it better when you Molly's in control."
page 29 should be "without": they cannot live with out it
page 29 missing "this": "We do through a process called ceding control"
page 41: "The energy wrapped it was around me"