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This is my first Webtease and any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Also I have no idea how to change the tease name so that's why the name makes no sense

Awesome! wrote: Fri Jan 03, 2025 10:03 am This is my first Webtease and any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Also I have no idea how to change the tease name so that's why the name makes no sense

I really much like it
Didn't actually had the time to play fully, but I went through the beginning and I find it looks solid

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One personal drawback for me is the level 1 censoring as I prefer to look into their eyes for as long as possible, so that would be more towards level 5 in my personal order. But everyone's different, so no real problem with that.

Regarding the title: there is the option in EOS to change the title under Options -> Basic Settings.
I haven't done it myself so no idea how the workflow with already published teases is.

Also I wouldn't mind an actual censor/beta maze tease

I love the tease, especially the concept. I think it has potential for a much longer and more complex tease.

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The progression from level to level is somewhat quick, this could be tracked out much much more. Unless I've missed something and gave certain "wrong" answers far too early.

It would be fun, to have a much longer tease based on this concept, while switching the beta-levels of the chips up and down. Maybe she makes you serve other girls, or you move around town, meeting girls, some knowing about the chip, some not etc.

Came for the maze, stayed for the beta chip

I think it's good for a first tease, much better than most. As kerker said it would be great if it were even longer.

Other than that here are some suggestions:
- A selection of Tinder dates at the beginning, they all have different types of beta chips/punishments
- Version 2 should be longer with a similar formula, it is really good

fitzy wrote: Fri Jan 03, 2025 10:52 pm Came for the maze, stayed for the beta chip

I think it's good for a first tease, much better than most. As kerker said it would be great if it were even longer.

Other than that here are some suggestions:
- A selection of Tinder dates at the beginning, they all have different types of beta chips/punishments
- Version 2 should be longer with a similar formula, it is really good

Those are some really great ideas! It will be a lot of work to create multiple different styles of mistresses but I'm up for the challenge
Do you have any suggestions for models/Influencers that could be featured?
I kind of rushed the ending since I was getting really tired and wanted to finish it all in one day
I also am not very familiar with Java so I couldn't figure out how to create hidden variables/ choices that impacted the level of censorship.
Thank you for the feedback!

Awesome! wrote: Sat Jan 04, 2025 3:37 am Do you have any suggestions for models/Influencers that could be featured? I also am not very familiar with Java so I couldn't figure out how to create hidden variables/ choices that impacted the level of censorship.

Making a complex tease really is a multiple day or multiple week project. But if you want to do it, I can help you with any kind of scripting you need. The information is all really out there, but if you need some specific functionality, I would be willing to build examples for you that you just have to adapt. With respect to models, I don't care too much. I would just pic one that you can find enough images of and that has a somewhat dominant look to her. They're basically all hot, and of course seeing a personal favorite is nice, but in the end it is the writing that makes a tease.

It was pretty good, the only thing i would have preferred is if it was less linear and and there were options to raise/lower censorship, possibly with other consequences. But I understand that would be a lot more work, so it's not a real complaint.

I have never been happier! This was GOLD!
Thanks a lot for the effort, nothing much to say aside from praise, maybe next time another humiliating body part to worship in addition to feet and pits could be tummies.

But aside from that, well done!