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Hi,

I am actually just reading through the tease and really like it. However there might be some minor mistakes:

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On page 27 you do not instruct to remove the full bottle. Not sure if this is intentional, but this way I would still wear it on page 28.

Page 29 you wrote now instead of know and later Nox instead of Now.

Page 31 paragraph 2 stripping should be capitalized.

Overall I really like the idea of the tease.

Unlike the first one I tried to play through this one and it was so much better. The drinking was realistic and even as someone who can hold their liquor i was completely drunk at the end. Decent pacing and good improvement to the first one which i didn't even start because it was far too much.

It could have a few more tasks at the end of the tease since, as you say in the tease, you go along with aynthing at some level of intoxication.

Got a whole evening free (6pm to bedtime), decided to try it. There's no disclaimer how long does it take, so I hope I'll manage to do it. Will update how it goes. (If someone is interested dm and I can update as I move along )

Also after reading this thread I got a question for you guys: if indeed end could use some more stuff, maybe you got any recommendations what other tease to do after this (hope I don't passout before lol)?

Adding progress below not so spoil anyone

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(Everything below might be related to my body and might be different for others)
- got to pee (page 18) very early and only managed a few drops. Seems my bladder is still processing the load.
- it's quite cold at my country (5 C), so needed to use warm coat. Might be hard to do during winter months tho.
- drinking with no top was so thrilling! Downed it in one go since it was wayy too cold to wait.
- those 2 shots hit me hard. I misread instructions, didn't tet the beer bottle and went outside. Had to ho back to get it and I already need to go...
- on the beight side, taking my pants down seems a lot easier than the top. It might be the alcohol, it might be the night that came.
- I am unable to run (coz I'm too drunk), so I'll have to try to walk fast for 15 mins. Tho my bladder is killing me already. Hoping very much I'll get to pee after 15 mins are up.
- okay the timing was amazing here. I got so desperate o spurted a few times at 14 and 15 mins. When I saw I can relieve myself, I was soo happy. I wqs doing that little by little either way.
- 4 shots.. no way I can do that without puking. I did 2 and w beer shots just to continue.
- okay, it did indeed end abruptly it seems. Might be a missed opportunity coz now I seem to be willing to do anything. Some pee dronking like in 1st part or whatever you fancy would work very well ai believe

So I tried this at a good, sunny autumn day in november in western Germany. the amount of alcohole is perfect. what I missed is the piss drinking section and some more tasks like watching some porn, etc. I'm full drunk but at the end I'm staying alone with my horniness. I want to be forced to edge and then have a break. At the and I want to have the choice to cum or stay denied. that would be awsome. Maybe some more pain can be part of a third tease, espeacialyy when we are more drunk. I would say there is once a time too mutch often to go outside. I would prefer a bit mutch more indoor activity. Although some Outside is nice. I hope everybody is understanding, 'cause I'm writing right after doing this tease.