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Of the four possible endings, only 1 ending felt like the true ending meanwhile the other 3 were very short. Not saying each ending needs to be very long however some more dialogue from the narrator elaborating the payers good or bad score would be nice - it'd be something to reward the players who decide to replay multiple times to get each ending

0088_ wrote: Tue Aug 27, 2024 8:44 pm Really nice tease! Love the lack of female nudity, presence of Goddess Alice and coloured text! Really great first tease!

Maybe for the sequel, introduce some randomisation. That would greatly improve the replay value!

Also, maybe include a link to this thread in the game, under "feedback".

Thanks for making this great tease, please keep making teases!

LintonDilton123 wrote: Tue Aug 27, 2024 11:16 am Although babecock is something I'm not aquatinted with, this tease peaked my interest because I also enjoy the subtle thrill of denying my tease players with censored images

The tease was easy to try once then get sucked into the goal of competing all 20 images correctly.

Had a straight forward tease structure which turned out to be very effective if you find yourself playing over and over to get 100%.

I'm glad the tease asks you how many tries it took because that way the player can choose their ending which encouraged me to replay until I got every outcome.

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Of the four possible endings, only 1 ending felt like the true ending meanwhile the other 3 were very short. Not saying each ending needs to be very long however some more dialogue from the narrator elaborating the payers good or bad score would be nice - it'd be something to reward the players who decide to replay multiple times to get each ending

Overall fun tease. Looking forward to the next one.

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The short endings for the “x tries” was definitely an oversight, just kind of forgot about them sadly..didn’t really put much planning into them and think it showed a bit!! The “true ending” was definitely the intended way to end properly, had a lot of fun with it so I put more effort in. But, if I’m offering different endings, the other ones should have more flavor to justify a quick replay. Thanks for the feedback, really good learning experience!!

VanessaGoonerAddict wrote: Fri Sep 13, 2024 3:19 am I really, really loved this tease. These sorts of memory games are among my favorite teases on this site and this is one of the best of them. I love Alice a ton, and you picked a bunch of really great images! That 2nd to last cock actually had me drooling. Especially considering this was your first tease, this was amazing!

one specific thing i want to point out is the fact that you didn't use any forced timers during the memorization part. some of these memory games have forced timers throughout the memorizing part and it makes replaying extremely tedious, and not the fun "im doing a task!" kind of tedious, just really annoying. so im glad you didnt include any.