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Pretty much first draft, so there may be errors. If you find any, please post here and let me know so I can fix them. Comments welcome. This is the next to the last teast in the series.

Just a small spelling error.. For the six strokes per second you have something like six seconds per second.. But I love the tease and the girl is incredible!

Very Nice tease, like always by your hand. but i do not understand: when Kate asks the name of the girl, one cannot decie for "Amy" but that is her name, isn't it?

Kind regards

Just wanted to say I just started working my way through the strangetown series (I'm at windows) I'd skipped them up until now. I'm glad I went back - it's really a superb series. Great writing, great use of all the options in flash, nice picture selection, and just all round all kinds of hot. Thank you!

On the subject of which, I have a feature request (yes, I know this is the wrong forum).

It would be cool to have a page which was a portal for tease series (perhaps an admin could pick the teases that qualified, rather than let authors put up lots of intended-first-parts-of-never-continued-series, and yes I'm counting myself among authors who would do that). The page could have a link for each series, perhaps with a rating for the series as a whole, and go through to a "playlist" like page which displayed the teases in the series in order.

I don't know if it's an error or if you meant for it be like that, but everytime I get to the Monty Python question, there is no correct answer. Am I just going crazy or was it intended that way?

Thanks for the kudos, Camp.

And Incubo...you must learn PATIENCE grasshoppa. And that's the only hint I'll give.

Ah ha!
You devious devil.
So you meant to drive me completely insane with that.
I knew it!