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kerkersklave wrote: ↑Mon Jan 29, 2024 10:53 pm I've enjoyed the tease, especially the humiliation aspect and the variety of tasks. The stroking speeds could be slower, unless you purposely want to make me stroke slow, I would consider 2 per sec a good base speed 3 per sec medium to fast and 4 per second really fast. Also I do not really like the timed very slow numbers of stroke like "stroke 15 times" and a 20 second timer or something. If you do a certain number of strokes within a time frame it should be a challenge. If you just want a bit of stroking at any speed, just ask for a decent number and place a button to continue like "100 worship strokes" or something. What is really problematic is giving stroking speeds without a beet and a timer, like 1.5 strokes per second in the brainwashing part. I have a basic feeling for how fast that is, but I will quickly deviate from it. Would be better to have a very gentle stroking beat in that section, at least for me, or have the girl count out a stroking speed every now and then. I am also not a big fan of redoing section when failing unless there is a real purpose to that, but answering questions you've already been asked does not make sense. Maybe have a punishment section that increases in difficulty or length each time, or do something like add clothes pegs to the body for each failure that adds up. The last section with the edging did not feel completely worked out yet. It was not really clear to me, whether I was supposed to edge as quickly as possible, for forcing me to edge. And once you press the edge button, there should be a break or instructions to back away from the edge while stroking or something. Because otherwise I am obviously right back on the edge within a few strokes if I want to. Also, as others have pointed out, the stopping of the beat should match the instructions given upfront. The pauses also came in longer chunks, so sometimes there wasn't a beat for several pictures, but then I could edge like 5 or 10 times in a row with the beat just continuing all the time. The last thing I am not a fan of is cumming at the end of a tease as then only successful ending. I usually do not want to cum for a tease, and it also does not really match the setting of humiliation and denial. There should at least be one story line where you do all the tasks but are rewarded by just more humiliation and denial at the end. But that's just my preference.

Oh and I think there was one section, where I was told that the speed would increase step by step but it did not. Can't remember right now which one that was.

Lotusrain wrote: ↑Tue Jan 30, 2024 1:06 am if you feel as though the rlgl is out of place then ask yourself for what was your original purpose for implementing it. Perhaps after adding certain things you feel it is too long, but for whichever reason you can always implement it in a part 2. Perhaps this section is meant to be a forced rehabilitation/conditioning method, in which case you should design these parts with the idea that the person is resisting form 2 perspectives mind and body. completing timed strokes could be a challenge where the person has to complete those strokes but doesn't want to, and where it might make the player fail. but if its slow strokes in timed sections then perhaps the thought is "this person is forcefully being conditioned".

for sections where ppl fail, a good practice is to at least have a start over option, with a input again option cuz perhaps the person made a typo. nobody likes redoing long sections. furthermore you can include an option which diminish the chances of having a satisfying ending.

Spoiler: show

Since the tease plays with elements of brainwashing, then the premise begins from a place of non consent(resistance) to consenual(acceptance). thus, things like cbt is probably to punish unwanted behaviors which is a form of classical conditioning.
Furthermore you can use rewards as a form of conditioning, for instance, the act of trying to resist a certain stimuli.
perhaps this example can help illustrate. premise: Person 1 has received therapy that makes him love person 2.

premise: Person 1 has received therapy that makes him love person 2.

1 - "I do not find you attractive"
2 - "really?"
1 - "yeah. your not my type, and will never be"
2 - "oh? so why are you so hard then?"

This is like a Forced transformation, where the person is trying to resist the changes occurring in his body. his mind is fighting against his body. to that point, timed strokes both slow and fast can do 2 things(separately or simultaneously), condition one to associate pleasure with the stimuli(slow) or encourage the person to cum to the stimuli(fast) when they do not want to but are forced to.

Ksoles wrote: ↑Tue Jan 30, 2024 6:02 am Thank you for the feedback. There is a chance not to cum, if your ruined earlier in the tease, maybe ill add a second ruin button later in the tease also. Not sure what you mean by adding a second story line, or how to do so sorry.

sinraven wrote: ↑Sat Feb 10, 2024 12:07 am Loving it so far but it hangs after page Aquiz-5

TheBoiiiWhoLived wrote: ↑Mon Feb 26, 2024 9:39 am Love it ! Thanks already :)

It did not work anymore for me today morning - it stops in the beginning after "waiting for other room" or something. Just wanted to keep that here :)

FeetTickler wrote: ↑Tue Apr 16, 2024 11:07 pm How's it going? I've really enjoyed the beta, hope it releases soon!

Very good work