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[Release] [Feedback] Succubus Summons
Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2023 12:55 pm
by Animeat
Scraped some leftover ideas together and made a tease with a silly analogue horror inspired story (it started as a joke).
I think it has some typos lurking around. Someone said they found some, but they couldn't remember where, and I couldn't find them, but if you do, please say!!!
Also general feedback please & thanks.
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=67853
Re: [Release] [Feedback] Succubus Summons
Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2023 10:04 pm
by Bonsai50
The music is much too loud!
Lyrics blur (overlap)
Re: [Release] [Feedback] Succubus Summons
Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2023 10:48 pm
by Animeat
Music's quieter now. Dunno what you mean by "lyrics" tho, it's an instrumental.
Re: [Release] [Feedback] Succubus Summons
Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2024 8:48 pm
by finn135
At the end, i choose one of the option but it still said i didn't choose any things then i get a denial
Re: [Release] [Feedback] Succubus Summons
Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2024 11:51 pm
by Animeat
finn135 wrote: Mon Jan 01, 2024 8:48 pm
At the end, i choose one of the option but it still said i didn't choose any things then i get a denial
I was 100% sure I fixed that in testing (missing notification remove action). It's fixed now...
Re: [Release] [Feedback] Succubus Summons
Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2024 3:06 pm
by Recursion
Best one yet, Animeat! I always look forward to your teases, and end up taking notes and making sure I've followed every path.
This one was especially good with the intense focus on feet/socks/footwear, super humiliating and degrading. My favorite parts were when it would sound like I might get to stroke to something else, but then nope, just more foot stuff
All the talk of sulfur, plus the couple Touhou images from a face-farting gallery, really got me excited and made me think you had finally come to the dark side and started incorporating fart fetish stuff. But alas, looks like you haven't sunk that low yet
Couple tiny typos you can fix if you want:
("is" instead of "it", "realise" instead of "realize")
"I made her a virgin with magic. She didn’t even feel it. Maybe she remembers
is, but tomorrow she’ll
realise that every time she ever got laid never happened. Even the memories will be gone."
(After first round of edging hell, "must" instead of "most")
"Until only the
must pure of lust remains..."
Re: [Release] [Feedback] Succubus Summons
Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2024 6:54 pm
by Animeat
Recursion wrote: Tue Jan 02, 2024 3:06 pm
Best one yet, Animeat! I always look forward to your teases, and end up taking notes and making sure I've followed every path.
This one was especially good with the intense focus on feet/socks/footwear, super humiliating and degrading. My favorite parts were when it would sound like I might get to stroke to something else, but then nope, just more foot stuff
All the talk of sulfur, plus the couple Touhou images from a face-farting gallery, really got me excited and made me think you had finally come to the dark side and started incorporating fart fetish stuff. But alas, looks like you haven't sunk that low yet
Couple tiny typos you can fix if you want:
("is" instead of "it", "realise" instead of "realize")
"I made her a virgin with magic. She didn’t even feel it. Maybe she remembers
is, but tomorrow she’ll
realise that every time she ever got laid never happened. Even the memories will be gone."
(After first round of edging hell, "must" instead of "most")
"Until only the
must pure of lust remains..."
Oh lol I didn't know those were face-farting lol.
"Realise" is just the UK spelling, but I've corrected the other two. Thanks for finding them