Milovana.com

Hope you like it,

any and all reactions; thoughts, bugs, positive and negative feedback welcome!

Thanks. I thought it was really hot. I'm not into eating my own cum, I clicked "no" to it at least 5 times, but the edging got the best of me, and I could feel my resolve crumbling, and that was a big turn-on.

Some thoughts...

* Look at how texturedmushroom sets and clears (using the Unset command) values in his script here: http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=2644. You could use it to set/clear whether or not clothespins are already on. It was a little silly when I got "put clothespins on your nipples" 5 times in a row.

* I liked the sound.

* It's "ruler", not "rule". ("Rule" is a word, but it's a law or judgement, not a stick.)

* I would have liked extended edging to be one of the punishments.

* The first woman in the tease looks... drugged. (just my opinion)

* The main model during edging was REALLY hot. (the Blue Fantasies girl)

* I think you want to say "you did very well" at the end. I don't remember your exact words but I think it was something like "you are very well done", which isn't really what I think you meant.

* When you were saying "down strokes only", it was rare that you ever reversed that with some new instructions. I wasn't sure if "down strokes only" was meant for just that frame or until told otherwise.

I know some of these are 'criticisms', but please don't take it badly. I'd've given it a 4 or 5 if we were allowed to vote for Nyx teases! Despite some of the grammar errors, this one was great at seducing and then getting more and more intense.

thanks camel,

well it was the first time i worked with flash
and i will fix the bugs and the other things.
it is just a test script.

thanks sven